tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post2939294329931134019..comments2011-06-10T21:30:22.449+05:30Comments on DeviantChronicles: Part 10Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07804918228089509380noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post-21243884659928672072010-03-07T09:44:24.072+05:302010-03-07T09:44:24.072+05:30its quite amazing the way you put all kind of emot...its quite amazing the way you put all kind of emotions together and yet make it look so simple keep it up.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post-8985667259067207292010-03-06T19:35:47.526+05:302010-03-06T19:35:47.526+05:30AMAZING. I know you of all people would know how t...AMAZING. I know you of all people would know how to write on alcoholism, and I'm pretty sure you'll do a great job :) <br /> <br />I love Naina, I seriously do. Her character is so relatable, yet so different from what we generally see. What really strikes me about her is her genuineness. She's not fake. You're developing her character beautifully :)<br /> <br />Also, I wonder what's with Nandita's parents. She did mention their bickering briefly in the previous chapter, but now I'm really curious to know why. I'm really glad you decided to explore other characters equally, gives a new dimension to the story.<br /> <br />Keep it up Aps! :)) Really looking forward to more :DNeetanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post-62755806053244162992010-03-05T21:05:07.327+05:302010-03-05T21:05:07.327+05:30Wow, Aparajita! WOW!! The way you describe Naina&#...Wow, Aparajita! WOW!! The way you describe Naina's feelings is so powerful. The first two paragraphs are simply beautiful!! :) <br />Very well-written.. The story is getting very, very captivating.<br />Looking forward to more :DHemanoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post-16816326862565124832010-03-05T17:18:58.259+05:302010-03-05T17:18:58.259+05:30it seems like a deep bonding is there between fath...it seems like a deep bonding is there between father and daughter(good to know such relationships).I'm glad it does not restrict itself to just father and daughter thing but its more like friendship that too a divine one...i can see that the girl is having some bad memories of past... anyways this update revealed the inner self and soul of the character,nicely written,yet more to come and yes more is expected to come too...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8234885522016869017.post-6146854643847799442010-03-05T15:51:30.857+05:302010-03-05T15:51:30.857+05:30good one yaar.good one yaar.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com